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Revision as of 02:18, 21 June 2012
My entry in smoking is the leading avoidable cause of mortality definitely needs improvement both grammatically, for clarity and for formatting it properly. It would be nice if Table 2 from the CDC link at the bottom can be loaded as a chart. I don't know how. Can someone please have a look at it and work on it using the base of these arguments? (Iro)
I guess this is what you intended, Iro? --Wiel (talk) 15:14, 13 June 2012 (CEST)
It's better but I will continue working on it. Thx for the chart but the title Malignant Neoplasms should not be there. (Iro)
Childhood exposures/illnesses
I just added some extensive notes about childhood exposure to smoke and its claimed relations to pneumonia, ear infections, SIDS etc. Feel free to correct anything!
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Michael
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The technology comes from Swiss ventilation company Airkel, and could well usher in a new era of comfortable smoking lounges. --Wiel (talk) 04:18, 21 June 2012 (CEST)
