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Antismoking advocacy groups will almost always show up at legislative hearings with a model young mother (preferably widowed) with young children who works as a waitress, bartender, or hotel/casino employee.  To emphasize the point of the vulnerability of the person and their family the children may, if old enough, be present in the legislative chambers, or, if not old enough for that, then a blown-up photo of the mom and her kids will be displayed.   
 
Antismoking advocacy groups will almost always show up at legislative hearings with a model young mother (preferably widowed) with young children who works as a waitress, bartender, or hotel/casino employee.  To emphasize the point of the vulnerability of the person and their family the children may, if old enough, be present in the legislative chambers, or, if not old enough for that, then a blown-up photo of the mom and her kids will be displayed.   
  
The testifier will note that this job is the ONLY job available to her for various reasons and that she is distressed because it will likely soon kill her and leave her children as orphans simply because she needs to earn money to feed them.  In reality of course, there are usually many waitress type jobs available in voluntarily non-smoking establishments and at least a modest selection of bartending jobs also so available.  No one is "forced" to work at one of these jobs in a Free-Choice job atmosphere long enough to have any legitimate health concerns even if the claims of the disputed EPA Report were valid (as will be discussed further in Section (B)).
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The testifier will note that this job is the ONLY job available to her for various reasons and that she is distressed because it will likely soon kill her and leave her children as orphans simply because she needs to earn money to feed them.  In reality of course, there are usually many waitress type jobs available in voluntarily non-smoking establishments and at least a modest selection of bartending jobs also so available.  No one is "forced" to work at one of these jobs in a Free-Choice job atmosphere long enough to have any legitimate health concerns even if the claims of the disputed EPA Report were valid {as will be discussed further in Section (B)}
  
 
The job limitation problem may be somewhat more valid in two cases:   
 
The job limitation problem may be somewhat more valid in two cases:   
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====B. Health risks of work exposure====
 
====B. Health risks of work exposure====
The health risks of working in a smoking environment for most people were best outlined in the EPA Report of 1992.  The EPA concluded, correctly, that the putative risks in terms of heart disease were not well-based enough to state a real concern about workplace exposure.  More research has taken place in the last 20 years of course, but the heart disease link has remained less strongly supported than the link to lung cancer a link the EPA estimated to offer a relative risk of 1.19 over the course of a 40-year work exposure, and which translates, assuming a base nonsmoking lifetime risk of about 0.5%, into a lifetime's increased risk of 1 in a thousand.
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The health risks of working in a smoking environment for most people were best outlined in the EPA Report of 1992.  The EPA concluded, correctly, that the putative risks in terms of heart disease were not well-based enough to state a real concern about workplace exposure.  More research has taken place in the last 20 years of course, but the heart disease link has remained less strongly supported than the link to lung cancer -- a link the EPA estimated to offer a relative risk of 1.19 over the course of a 40 year work exposure, and which translates, assuming a base nonsmoking lifetime risk of about .5%, into a lifetime increased risk of 1 in a thousand.
  
 
There are two things that need to be noted about this claim:
 
There are two things that need to be noted about this claim:

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